请英语好的来剖析一下小生七年级的英语作文语法错误

题目

请英语好的来剖析一下小生七年级的英语作文语法错误
中文：我盼望着去北京爬长城,我的愿望终于要实现了
本周末我们全家打算去爬长城,将在那儿呆两天；我们将坐火车去,乘飞机回来.
我打算拍一些美景,妈妈打算带一些吃的、喝的东西.此刻我们在做准备.
英文：I'm looking forward to Beijing climb the Great Wall,I wish finally to achieve
This weekend we family plan to go to the Great Wall,will stay there for two days; We will go by train,fly back.
I'm going to take some beauty,mom going to take some food,something to drink.Now we in preparation.

答案

的确有很多语法错误.我先给修改下,有问题再找我.
I'm looking forward to going to Beijing to climb the Great Wall.My wish will come true finally.This weekend my family plan to go to the Great Wall,and will stay there for two days.We'll go there by train and fly back.I'm going to take some photos of natural beauty there.Mom is going to take some food and something to drink.Now we're in preparation.
我尽量在保持原作的基础上修改语法错误,没做大改动.有问题可以再找我.