（急!On my first school day this term,

题目

（急!On my first school day this term,
On my first school day this term,my new English teacher enters the classroom .I soon found that she was the beautiful girl with a big smile no her face .First ,she introduced her .Then she asked us introduce ourselves in turn with English .When it was my turn ,I felt so shyly that I didn't dare to Say a word .She came up to me and told me not be afraid of ."Just have a try "she encouraged .Hear this I slowly calmed down .Finally ,I managed to speak ,but did it quite well .She praised me for my progresses .How happy I was then

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第一行 enters改成entered
第二行 the改成a no her face改成on her face introduced her改成introduced herself
第三行 introduce改成to introduce so shyly改成shy
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