翻译几句英语 不要机械翻译

题目

翻译几句英语 不要机械翻译
may the brisk steps slow down and finally atay in our hearts.
Ardent love, like the green of tree , thick and dense, will vie for splendor with the days and years.
love is a circle , that doth restless move
In the same sweet eternity of love

答案

首先说一下,原文似乎有点错误!
may the brisk steps slow down and finally stay in our hearts.
但愿轻快的脚步慢下来并最终在我们心中停住
Ardent love, like the green of tree , thick and dense, will vie for splendor（英式是splendour） with the days and years.
炽热的爱情像青葱的树木,茂密繁盛,意与日月争辉.
love is a circle , that doth restless move
In the same sweet eternity of love
爱情是一个轮回,不停旋转!
在这个永恒的甜蜜的爱情里.（感觉这句逻辑有点奇怪,呵呵,见谅~~）