帮我看看这篇文章有没有什么错误..

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帮我看看这篇文章有没有什么错误..
The day has come.I'll graduate from my middle school soon.As these years in which i studied with my friends pass by,i become sader and sader.Think back these three fantastic years,we were all grow up.
From the first day that I met you,iwa learn how to get along with one another and how to be a man.Now i want to thank you all.
Troy:You are my the frist friend in the middle school,while you are my classmate when i was a pupil.We have the same idol,Backstreet Boys.So we often talk about it,and we often sing it ,it let us happy,doesn't it?Do you remember the scene that we sung the song celled "Every body"?I can bet this will be unforgettable!You know,you are very funny,and you always make me laugh,it seems that anything you said have a amazing skill,i was very happy when you told to me a jok.Did you remember?One day,i hurt you feelings and hurt myself,too.We had no talk with each other in those days.But as time goes by,I found out,and to my great joy,you for give me soon.
还没写完,这些先帮我看看有什么错误...我是个初学者,英语不怎么样,貌似会有很多错误,帮我看看哈,谢谢大哥大姐啦...感激不尽、...感激不尽~

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The day is coming...第一句就有问题,之后就更加看不下去了...全是语法错误.