请帮忙完善一下我的英语自我介绍,小升初面试要用.

题目

请帮忙完善一下我的英语自我介绍,小升初面试要用.
Heleo ereryone!My name is Wang Shuo .I'm from Yong an lu school.My English teacher is Mrs chen.I like English and reading books.This is me.Thang you very much.
有点短,也不算很具体...
Heleo ereryone！My name is Wang Shuo .I'm from Yong an lu school.My English teacher is Mrs chen.I like English and reading books.There are three people in my family.My father,my mother and me.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.I am a studen.This is me.Thang you very much.
刚刚少了点...

答案

加上年龄、喜欢的动物 、为什么喜欢这个动物、介绍一下你的家庭组成、喜欢的运动.多用“I think……”会更好