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Q:Traffic and housing problems in major cities would be solved by moving big companies,factories and their employees to the countryside.Do you agree or disagree?
In modern society,with the development of economy in majoy cities.More and more companies and factories invest in these developed cities.They set up their business by compete landscapes in cities and establish buildings or factories in order to creat profit.However,large amounts of buildings and employees lead numbers of people in cities increase.They could be raise the problems of traffic and housing.I am in favor of the point that moving big companies,factories and their employees to countryside.
As we all know,when there was no big companies and factories,city must be peace and people could not upset by traffic.Now,with the increased amounts of unlocaled employees in those companies,everytime go for work in morning and go home in the evening there must have traffic problems.Moreover,companies and
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