请看一下这篇文章有没有语法问题

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请看一下这篇文章有没有语法问题
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen,I’m very glad to
make a speech here.Today my topic is “I love you,China.”
Since the day I was born,I began to have a proud
name―Chinese.Since the day I began to talk,the most beautiful sentence I’ve
ever learnt has been “I love you,China!”
I love you,China,and I’m so proud of being a
Chinese.I’m proud that I’ve got the beautiful yellow skin,black eyes and
black hair.I’m also proud that I speak the most beautiful language in the
world―Chinese.
I love you,China,for I can feel the deep love
you give me every day,every minute.Last year,I got an opportunity to visit
the West street in Yangshuo.During my staying there,A friend of my father’s
in England
once invited my family to dinner.While at ,he looked at me and asked:“Little
boy,how many English words do you know?” “About four thousand,” I answered,
“How amazing you are!” he said,“ you were living in China all the time,how ca

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（1）首先beautiful可以用wonderful替换减少一些重复.倒数几段里面：（2）During my staying there：stay本身可以作名词,表示停留,不用staying的.（3）a friend of my father’s in England once invited my family ...