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有没有人帮我修改一下这篇英语作文...
There is a public controversy nowadays over that is it beneficial for young people to make a plan or organize to face to the complex modern life.People who argue that it is useful for young to do so believe that by making a plan young people will have a clear way to achieve their aim,but people who advocate it is not beneficial believe that it is a limit to young people’s development.I firmly advocate the viewpoint that it is a great help for young people to face to the complex modern life.
Among the numerous advantages of making a plan is that it will keep young people on their right way to achieve goal without lost in the complex life.A famous Chinese thinker Li Ye once put his word “A good plan equals to half win.” As a result,it is not hard to believe the importance of making a plan.For instance,Lijia Cheng is the richest man in Hong Kong.Since he was young he draw himself a plan,by the time he get richer,he didn’t lost himself in the complex life,and ke

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Very good的拉...真的.虽然有些东东看不懂.