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帮我看看这篇文章,英语的文章
I am a sanguine,cautious,enthusiastic ,wise and knowledgable girl ,she who treats people with hospitality and kindness,I am responsible ,positive and would love to meet any challenges in any time!
I am the kind of person who do things step by step ,full of passion and diligence,good skills in appliance ,I love communicate with people and that is why everybody likes me.
I will obey the law of the country ,the rules of the company and the social routine.
I am a qualified talent with basic quality and ability,I will win respect doublelessly if you can give an offer
帮我看看有没有什么语法问题，或者通顺上的~不用翻译中文……

答案

第一行 she 去掉
第二行 meet 最好换成 face
第三行 challenges变成challenge 而且 in去掉
第四行 貌似应该passion,diligence and good skills...
第五行 I love to communicate..