初一下英语修改作文

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初一下英语修改作文
My frend is Ding wang.He think of the sunny day isgreat.On sunny day.He like do homework.He think of the raing day is terrible.On raing day.He like watch TV.He think of the windy day is pretty good.He like fly a kite.He think of the snowy day is great.He like make snowme.He think of the cloudy day is not bad.He like read book.
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My frend is Ding wang.He think that the sunny days are great.On sunny days.He like doing homework.He think that the rainy days are terrible.On rainy days.He like watching TV.He think that the windy days are pretty good.He like flying a kite.He think that the snowy days are great.He like making snowmen.He think that the cloudy days are not bad.He like reading books.
没见这么写作文的,还有我的水平比你高不了多少,所以错了别怪我