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dear panpan,
my family and i are going to travel allover france.so,maybe i need your help.
could you take care of my pet dog?of course you will say you can.you can call the pet pig Duoduo.
could you please do these things everyday?play toy ball with him ,and talk with him.and could you feed him wieh delicious food?because he os very greedy.don't forget give him water.cpuld you please do exercise with he everyday?i don't want him to becomes lazy.
Thanks,
Bow

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Dear Panpan,
My family and I are going to travel all over France,so,I'm asking you for your help.
Could you please take care of my pet dog?I hope you can,and you can call the pet pig (到底是狗还是猪?前后有一个改掉) Duoduo.
Could you please do these things everyday?Play toy ball with the dog (或者是pig) and talk to him.Also,feed him delicious food if possible?He is a little bit greedy.And please don't forget to give him water and do exercise with him everyday.This way,he won't become too lazy.
Thanks,
Bow
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