下面中译英有哪些错误啊

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下面中译英有哪些错误啊
随着社会的快速发展,我国税收制度也与此同时不断进行着一定范围的调整,企业所得税税收筹划空间较大,利用各种税收筹划方法,合理、合法减轻企业税收负担对实现企业效益最大化至关重要.本文结合我国企业所得税税收筹划的现状及存在问题,侧重介绍企业如何利用纳税人身份、准予扣除项目、相关业务的税务处理、企业所得税优惠政策等进行税收筹划,通过对具体税收筹划实例的分析和讨论,加深对税收筹划理论的认识,希望对企业纳税人开展税收筹划活动有所启示.
With the rapid development of human society,China's tax system is also at the same time constantly engaged in a range of adjustment,there is still spacious room for the corporate income tax planning.By using a variety of tax planning methods,reasonable,legitimate to reduce the corporate tax burden to maximize the efficiency of enterprises is very essential.
This article unifies our countryenterprise income tax planning status and existing problems,focusing on how to use taxpayer,deductible items,related business tax,enterprise income taxpreferential policies for tax planning,tax planning through the concrete exampleanalysis and discussion,to deepen the understanding of tax planning theory,hoping enlightenment of tax planning activities on Corporate taxpayers.

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(Along with the rapid social development* ), China's tax system is also (under constant adjustment in certain areas). There is still (much) room for (changes in the plans of instituting) corporate income tax. Using a variety of tax planning methods to (reasonably) reduce, (if law permits,) the corporate tax burden is (of critical importance) to maximize the efficiency of enterprises. This article (aims to assess the status quo and existing problems of the planning of enterprise income tax in our country, with a focused discussion of) how (the enterprises plan their taxes using the allowable deductible items for a tax payer. the dealings of the taxes of related business, and preferential policies for enterprise income tax,). (Through analysis and discussion of concrete examples), this article also aims) to deepen the understanding of tax planning theory (for purposes of providing some assistance in) tax planning activities on Corporate taxpayers
*.社会指的是中国社会而不是人类社会