关于托福作文 有经验的进

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关于托福作文 有经验的进
本人10.10号就要考了 因为先前低估了写作所需要的准备工作 现在有些措手不及了 这几天看了张红岩的 十天搞定托福作文 昨天才开始写完整的文章
现在发两篇昨天写的 求估分 批改 给意见（今后几天怎样练习）
第一篇 （因为是第一次花了40分钟 拼错的单词将近十处 发的是拼写错误改过的评分的话按照拼错3个的评）
he issue of whether computers or books contribute more merit to the library is complex and controversial one .On one hand some one consent to the point that books take more advantages on the other hand the view that computers outweigh than books in many ways be supported by others.After carefully considered I concluded that the later one makes more sense I would like to present evidences favoring my thoughts
First and foremost the significant features of computers –convenient-
and efficient can be manifest seen.Are you ever got lost in a confusion and huge library Do you have a experience that the countless books exhausted your energy and interest before you find and read it?This situation is not rare in a library which is lack of computers.As we know the library is open to serve for students.How

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The issue of whether build up a new factory takes advantages or disadvantages is a complex and controversial one .On one hand some strongly against this project with many worries .On the other hand ot...