请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误

题目

请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误
star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you will marry someone in wonderful dress,and i will play songs to beg for your happiness,oh dear,i will always miss you like the one and the only rose.有什么错误请帮我改一下好不好?

答案

Star is singing songs to the rose,and the melody of guitar runs around ears.I love you more than any words.I say goodbye to precious things and I am sorry that I did not give you warm hugs.I felt hurt when I saw your tears last time.You will marry someone in a wonderful dress,and I will play songs for your happiness.Oh dear.I will always miss you as the only rose.感觉很中文啊.最近在学GMAT语法,看着每句话都有错的感觉- -.那个语法实在是太严格了,我简单的给你改了一下.仅供参考啦