请问这篇托福作文能得多少分?

题目

请问这篇托福作文能得多少分?
同意否在小区建工厂
There is a general discussion today about building a new factory near the community,those who criticize that the factory may have many disadvantages.In my point of view,there may be some drawbacks of this arrangement; however,I believe that there are far more advantages.
As a popular saying goes,” everything has two sides.” The progress of building a factory may bring us some troubles.On the other hand,we will benefit more and more from the new factory.We all know that China is still a developing country and there is still many people who have difficulty in obtaining a job,by building the new factory,we will have an excellent opportunity to work there.thus,the new factory can not only help the people who is unemployed but also make contribution to the economic of local government.
Another advantage that cannot be ignored is that it will promote the development of other commercial activities near the community,such as shopping mall,restaurant and

答案

60个Percents.