My good friend

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My good friend
I have a good friend,her name is Mary.She is a Chinese girl,and she is a student.Her favorite subject is English.But she doesn’t like math,it’s so difficult.Her favorite Day is Friday,because she has two English.She likes green best,she has a green bag and a green book case.She likes hamburgers,salad and ice cream.Her birthday is December 28th .Her likes comedies and Beijing Opera .She often goes to movies with me on weekends.
This is my friend.
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My good friendI have a good friend.Her name is Mary.She is a Chinese girl,and she is a student.Her favorite subject is English.But she doesn’t like math,because it’s so difficult.Her favorite Day is...