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Nowadays,many people discuss if teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Many people may disagree with teacher make their social or political view known to students because they think social or political views are not closely related to class knowledge.It wastes a lot of time to teach these views to students.However,there are also many people think it’s good for student that teachers talk about social problem at class.We can't say which one is wrong because each answer has its reason.In my opinion,I think teacher should make their social or political view known to students in the classroom.
Firstly,we should to think about political or social things in our age.So teachers can guide us to understand the society.We are now the age of 16.This means that two years later we will become an adult.When we become an adult,we must to care the politics and social.They are very necessary to us life.Our teacher always makes his social or political views known to us in the classroom.He said many of the view are very correct.He often explains some reasons about social events in his class..I think it is good for us to develop and know the world.
Secondly,teachers can tell us a lot of social or political views from the adult perspective.Adults have experienced things more than us.They think things more comprehensive.We are teenagers,so we just live in a world simply that do not need us to think things more difficult.Therefore,teachers can tell us something more comprehensive.From this,we can also learn a lot of method of thinking social or political things.
Lastly,the teacher tells about social or political views in class can make us won’t feel bored.If teachers only teach knowledge from books,we will not have a lot of interest in class.The class will be very boring.Maybe we will sleep in the class or think other things in class.If teachers tell something except books,maybe we will focus on the teacher.Therefore,we will not feel tired in class.I like teachers who like make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
In conclusion,I would like to say,people have different thinking from different angles.All of them are correct.So we can't say which one is not correct.Because it is all our own opinions and others from the perspective of they will disagree with us.I think teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.

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Nowadays, many people discuss if(改用whether 会较好) teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom(classrooms 用复数). Many people may disagree with teacher(t...