英语作文 帮忙看看语法有哪些错误 能打多少分?按英语三级做参考

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英语作文 帮忙看看语法有哪些错误 能打多少分?按英语三级做参考
Dear principals,
I am one ordinary in the school student, I write a letter for you, is must reflect our cafeteria. does not make us to satisfy, cafeteria food has given us many choices, but also has some not to be able the satisfying existence. At the same time, the price and the peripheral school compare are too high, food many put has been very long, for example, the vegetable was puts several days to sell, sometimes the meat changed flavor, the service personnels efficiency a little was also slow, was best, I hoped that could improve food the quality and its service. If my suggestion is adopted, I will be happy, thank your adopting!

your student

答案

老实说,这里边的错误太多了,不光是语法错误,还有很多的用词错误,改的话真的很难,如果满分100的话,我只能给60了,好好努力吧