雅思小作文批改（剑5test1）

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雅思小作文批改（剑5test1）
The graph illustrates the dramatic comparison of the proportion of the population aged 65 and over during the period from 1940 to 2040 in 3 countries.
When it comes to japan,its proportion started in the year of 1940 in a position from 5% to approximate 3% until 1960,followed by a stable tendency before restarting to the original level in the year of 2000.
In view of Sweden and USA,which demonstrate a constantly increasing movement,started itself from 7% and 9% to 16% and 14% for each during the same period as the first country.
It is worth mentiong that the expected proportions in 3 countries are blessed with a noticeable climbing ,especially Japan ,which ascend sharply to 27% in the last 2 decades.As to the other countries,Sweden and USA all experience moderate increase in the last 2 decades,hitting 25% and 24% respectively,although sweden suffer from a little fluctuation in the year from 2000 to 2020.
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The graph illustrates the dramatic comparison of the population proportion aged 65 and over from year 1940 to 2040 in three countries.In Japan, it's population proportion started in the year of 1940 a...