英文申请信,帮忙检查错误(语法和格式)

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英文申请信,帮忙检查错误(语法和格式)
Dear sir or madam,
I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroeconomics,portfolio investment,financial markets,commercial banking,international trade theory and practice,international settlement,financial management,financial accounting and management accounting etc.May I know if I am qualified to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance I would be grateful if you could also inform me of the tuition fee for per year of the Master's Degree in Finance.And which language I have to submit results and what is the specific requirements?
Thank you very much for your reply and kind assistance.
from：avivi

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I am a student from China and During my undergraduate studies,
can you tell me if i have access to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance
And which language I have to submit results and what is the specific requirements?
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