希望高手看看小弟文章是否有语法错误

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希望高手看看小弟文章是否有语法错误
Hey,everyone,I'm wangruijing.From Central China Normal University Elementary School fourth grade five,I am very pleased to be able to participate in the Fourth New Oriental English children's bubble competition,usually I have a lot of loves,sing and dance,I have a bit of research,poetry readings,craft production,also easy for me,besides these,English has always been proud of is my point,finally the opportunity to express themselves,I will seize this opportunity,let me make this the arrival of graced the stage.

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Hello,everyone,I'm wangruijing from Central China Normal University Elementary School .I'm in Class four,Grade five,and I am very pleased to be able to participate in the Fourth New Oriental English Children's Bubble English competition.I have a lot of hobbies,like singing and dancing.I am skilled in reading poetry and making crafts.Besides these,English has always been a proud of mine.Now,I finally have the opportunity to express myself,I will seize this opportunity,let me be the grace of the stage.