toefl 托福作文 大家看看这篇能打多少分

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toefl 托福作文 大家看看这篇能打多少分
Why People Attend College or University?
There are many advantages to a college or university education.Students have ample opportunities to explore a variety of interests,increase at once specific skills and general knowledge.Needless to say,a university degree often helps a person get prepared for the career with more ease.
Firstly,it is the lift of team spirit that most students take into account.They have a deep understanding with our society and get accustomed to cooperation.Genuine knowledge,of course,enables us to realize how to cope with the sophisticated interpersonal relationships.After graduation,they can find a more efficient,skillful way to deal with various problems.
Secondly,so important is vast and systemic knowledge.There is no other place than a university where a student can get vast education in order to be qualified to become a professional in a specific area.As people are more and more practical,therefore,people want a high

答案

5分（但是5分也分档的----中档吧）
有一点小的语法错误---
不过层次很清晰,理由也很充分.举例子是很重要的