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Professional experiences
2007 –present:Suntar Ceramic Technology Limited (SCT),Xiamen.
SCT is a joint venture between Sinomem technology (Xiamen) Ltd and ITN of Germany.SCT manufactures and sells alumina ceramic membrane.
Technical supervisor 2009-2010
Responsibility:
 Managed five technicians,with responsibility for two projects of development.
 Responsibility for building the standard of alumina powder,and recommended for the finalizing alumina supplier.
 Managed technology department,with responsibility for improving the process to reduce the scrape,and improve quality.
 Provided technical support for customer.
 Reported directly to the president of the company.
Technical engineer 2007-2009
Responsibility:
 Responsibility for building the standard of alumina powder,and recommended for the finalizing alumina supplier.
 Responsibility for improving the sintering

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Professional experiences
2007 –
Suntar Ceramic Technology Limited (SCT),Xiamen.
SCT is a joint venture between Sinomem technology (Xiamen) Ltd and ITN of Germany.SCT manufactures and sells alumina ceramic membrane.
Technical Supervisor 2009-2010
Responsibilities:
 Managing five technicians,responsible for two projects of development.
 Responsible for developing the standards of alumina powder,and sourcing and finalizing the alumina suppliers.
 Managing the Technology Department,with responsibility for improving the process to reduce the scrape,and improve quality.
 Providing technical support for customers.
 Reporting directly to the president of the company.
Technical engineer 2007-2009
Responsibilities:
 Responsible for developing the standard of alumina powder,and sourcing and finalizing the alumina suppliers.
 Responsible for improving the sintering process to reduce the scrape.
 Providing technical support for customers.
Achievements:
 As a main developer,take active part in the industrialization of alumina membrane,including the development of recipe,setting up standard of alumina powder,estabilishing sintering technology.
 Actively participating in the development of coating recipe of alumina,developed the most important recipe of P25 dispersing solution and then saved 80,000 EUR of technology transfer fee for the company in 2009.
 Improved the sintering process,raised pass rate of sintering from 70 to 90 percent in 2008.
 Increased the production capacity of furnace by 15% in 2009.
Awards:
 Being awarded the Third Prize of “Xiamen Scientific and Technological Progress”in 2009.
 Being awarded the title of the Best Employee of the company in 2009.
2005-- 2007:Kaiyuan magnetic material Ltd.,Mianyang.
Position：Technician specialized in sintering
Responsibilities:responsible for the process control of sintering.
Education
2001－2005
LANZHOU UNIVERSITY,Lanzhou
Major:Chemical materials
Self-evaluation:
Aggressive,ability to work independently,willing to assume responsibilities,
Language skills:
English as working language.
Computer skill:
frequent user of excel,words.
Hobbies:
Swimming,walking.