求助批改英语作文（高中）

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求助批改英语作文（高中）
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With the development of the modern society,what will our life be like in future?Perhaps we can live under the sea and on the moon.People don’t have to go out for shopping or seeing a doctor anymore.Thanks to the internet providing us with conveneint life.And there will be more TV progammers for people to choose.People can also break away from the tiring housework which is helped by robots.Then we will have more time to do other things.With the development of agricutural ,people’s diets will be much healthier. Advanced techenology will improve our enviroment greatly.As for the space,human beings also make great achievements.

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With the development of the modern society, what will our life be like in the future? Perhaps we can live under the sea and on the moon. People don't have to go out for shopping or see a doctor anymor...