帮我修改一篇初二英语作文

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帮我修改一篇初二英语作文
关于my hobby的,80字左右,100字以内.
Different people have different hobbies.Let’s me introduce my hobby.
My favorite hobby is singing.I had been singing when I was a 4-year-old girl.I almost love singing all kinds of music.But I am adept at country music (中国民乐怎么说?).I can imitate some singers’ voice and sometimes I’m singing at home to share each other’s joys.I often dream that I am gonging to be a singer some day.But I don’t know whether I’ll be a successful singer like Song Zuying.But I believe anything depends on working hard,so my dream will come true,won’t it?
This is a great hobby for me witch made me feel very proud.

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写的好 比我初中的水平好多了