请老师帮忙改改英语作文,

题目

请老师帮忙改改英语作文,
Dear Bob,
Last week I made a survey in my class about the universities they would like to go.I’m writing to tell you the result.
70 percent of my classmates choose universities in our province.They think there are more chance to be admitted to the universities in the province.25 percent of them choose university in other provinces.It will be more independence and there are more universities for them to choose from.5 percent of them choose foreign universities.They think it can improve their language as well.
Yours,
Li Hua

答案

“They think there are more chance”改为There is ……
” 25 percent of them choose university “改为 universities
” It will be more independence“改为形容词independent