帮我把这两段英文改改语法错误.改好的作为答案

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帮我把这两段英文改改语法错误.改好的作为答案
There are fore people in my family—my mom,my dad ,my little brother and me.My father is a business man.My mother stay at home and teach my little brother.There are many joys in my family because my father is very humorous.He often tells some jokes to us.So we laugh every day.What’s more,my father is a great cooker too.So I can almost eat delicious food every day.My mother was very beautiful when she was young.She is a warm-hearted woman.She often helps others without repay.She is just like a friend of mine.I think I have a warm family and I love it very much!
I’m very friendly.But I’ll be a shy when I get along with a stranger.But when we become familiar,I’ll always laugh all the time.I have many hobbies,such us listening to music,watching movie,taking photos,ride bicycle and so on.And now I studying street dance with my friends.I’m warm-hearted,so if you have difficulty in doing something,you can ask me for help.I promise I’ll try my best to help you.Thi

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I have a warm/happy family.(段落以一个 (statement) 开头).There are four people in my family—my mom,my dad,my little brother and me.My father is a business man.My mother stays at home and takes care of my little brother.My home is full of joy.My father is very humorous and tells jokes a lot.We laugh every day.My father is also a great cook/chef.So we can enjoy delicious food every day.My mother was very beautiful when she was young.She is a warm-hearted woman.She often helps others without expecting anything in return.She is like a friend of mine.My little brother is so adorable and likes to follow me around/everywhere.（我加了一句你弟弟) I love my family very much!
I consider myself a very friendly person.I can be shy when I first meet someone.Once we get familiar with each other,you will see and hear me laughing all the time.I have many hobbies,for example,listening to music,watching movies,taking photos,riding bicycle and so on.Now/Currently I am studying street dance with my friends.
I’m also a warm-hearted person.If you have any difficulties doing something,you can always ask me for help.I promise I’ll try my best to help you.This is just me—a boy who likes to get along with everyone.
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