英语短文改错详细解释.

题目

英语短文改错详细解释.
V．短文改错
I like music very much,pop songs particularly.Every evening then (改when)I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加am )at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder..The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) me into the colourfully（改(colourful或colorful) world of music.Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to fix my attention to (改on)my homework.She does not like the (去the)pop music.Like most grown-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young.It is a truth which(改that) people of different age (改ages)understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.求每一处改错的详细解答.

答案

then (改when)这个比较简单,then是然后,怎么都不对啊.
I (加am )at home 原句中没有谓语动词啊,主语是i,所以加am
The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) 这个句子的主语是patterns,是复数啊,所以谓语动词不需要用三人称单数形式
colourfully（改(colourful或colorful) world of music.形容词修饰名词world,副词修饰动词或者形容词.所以必须是形容词形式
Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs.now and then是有时候,偶尔的.通篇文章都是用的一般现在是,这里的时间也不是过去,所以不用使用过去式
fix my attention to (改on)my homework.fix …on你可以理解是固定搭配
the (去the)pop music,定冠词如果不是一些特殊情况如最高级、乐器、独一无二等,而是你认为是特指,那么都可以翻译成“那个”,你翻译出来觉得顺嘴就是对的,不顺嘴就是错了.妈妈不喜欢“那个”流行音乐,明显不爽
of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young.their是“他们的”这是很典型的单复数错误
It is a truth which(改that) people of different age (改ages)understand 这是一个主语从句,it是形式主语,而引导词在句子中不做任何成分,所以必须用that引导.different后面必须加可数名词复数