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你是想成为独生子女还是有兄弟姐妹：
i hope i have a brother or sister.in my eyes if i have a brother or sister ,i will have more love ,we can help each other dont always let parents to give we help,and if i have a brother or sister my life must have more happy ,love and some interesting thing,that is so beauty and so cool!if my family is only three people:my parents and me,that could loss some pleasure to me.because there is not a age like me people ,a age like me people can have more common language compete parents.so i hope i have a sister or brother.
你的班里有人熬夜做作业,午休时间也在学习,却在课堂上打瞌睡,而且早上经常懒床,导致常常来不及吃早餐：
谈谈这种现象
谈谈你对此的看法,并建议
i find now have some classmates they always sleep to late because they homework is too large,they are study is very hard ,they even the midday rest time also to study,beacuse these,they are too tired,someone even sleep at class!hower it is not worst at all thing,the worst at all thing is they get up late in the monrning ang even dont eat breakfast!

答案

Brother and sister 可以改 siblings (兄弟姐妹）.In my eyes 则能改成 from my perspective. (大概就是 ‘从我的角度来说.’）I will have more love 是绝对语病!写英文不能用华语直直翻译哦! We can help each ot...