写了一篇雅思作文 希望有高手来指点并打个分 非常感谢

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写了一篇雅思作文 希望有高手来指点并打个分 非常感谢
Recently the issue of whether or not accept equal members of male and female students in every suvject has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.in this essay,i aim to explore this complicate phenomenon from diverse perspectives,identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effectve measures.on a personal note,i am approve of that the students should be seperate as same amount in male and female in every subject.
some people suggest that the man have more creative than woman in some subjects such as methematics.one of dsquieting facts stemming from this is that some woman will give up their right to choice the Science and mathematics Education.this has resulted in the extreme disparity between the male and the female students.however,in my opinion,accepted equal members of male and female in school are very important.
as far as i am concerned,an arry of integrated factors contributing to this com

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Task 2(议论文)的三方面评分标准是：Arguments,Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)；Communicative Quality(交流质量)；Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构).Arguments,Ideas and evidence涉及对于...