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Computer Games
Computer games are becoming more and more popular all over the world.Just as every coin has two sides.computer games have both advantages and disadvantages.
A majority of people think that playing computer games is wrong.Now more and more people wallow in computer games .You may often hear some news about someone who died of playing computer games.Under the influence of computer games.Many people don’t want to study and work .
However.People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that computer games are good for us ,Playing computer games can practice reactions and ideation.
It’s difficult to say whether playing computer games is good.Personally,I believe that we can do better if we play computer games wisely.When we get tived.we can play computer games for a while to relax ourselves.

答案

Computer games are becoming more and more popular all over the world.Just as every coin has two sides,people have two opinion on computer games.
A majority of people think that playing computer games is useless.Now more and more people wallow in computer games .You may often hear some news about someone who died of playing computer games.And (being) addictive in computer games,many people don’t want to study and work .
However.People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that computer games are good for us ,Playing computer games can practice reactions and ideation.
It’s difficult to say whether playing computer games is good or not.Personally,I believe that we can do better if we play computer games wisely.When we get tired.we can play computer games for a while to relax ourselves.