英文段子检查语法错误~

题目

英文段子检查语法错误~
Last year,my parents held a amazing birthday part for me.It’s memorable in my life.There is love to be surely from my parents friends,and all of them.
Actually,I got my dream car by BMW seven,that’s my frist car in my life.The same time I got Omega too,so that’s a perfect day.
Finally,that day everybody made dinner together,and saing dancing,so I learn that we need fridship to share happiness and sorrow.Friendship help us understand who we are,why we need each other and what we can do for each other.

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1.held an amazing party
2.it was memorable
3.there surely is love from
4.parents and friends,可以去掉all of them
5.by 改称which is a
6.that's the first car
7.I also got an Omega at the same time,so that was
下面一整段
We made dinner together on that day,then we have sung and danced.I learned that we need friends to share happiness and sorrow.Friendship helps us understand who we are,why we need each other and what we can do for each other.