假设你是Tony,今年寒假要去参加由市共青团组织的赴澳大利亚“绿色之旅” 冬令营（winter camp）活动。请你根据一些提示，写一篇在开营式上的自我介绍。介

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假设你是Tony,今年寒假要去参加由市共青团组织的赴澳大利亚“绿色之旅” 冬令营（winter camp）活动。请你根据一些提示，写一篇在开营式上的自我介绍。介绍必须包含要点提示，可适当拓展。要求词数在70-80之间，开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
英文名字（Tony），来自中国杭州, 出生于1998年。(was born in 出生于)
经常锻炼。每天吃水果蔬菜，喝牛奶；很少吃垃圾食品
学校离家两公里；骑自行车上学
与好朋友Tom比较：Tom比你高，比你文静；你更外向。
你打算：努力学习，取得好成绩
I’m very glad to introduce(介绍)myself to all of you . ___________________________________
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答案

I’m very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My English name is Tony. I was born in 1998. I live in Hangzhou, a very beautiful city. I’m very healthy, because I often exercise. I go to school by bike with my friend Tom. It’s only two kilometers from our home to school. Oh, Tom is my good friend, he’s taller and quieter than me, and I’m more outgoing.
In my free time, I often play basketball with Tom. For food, I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I also drink milk, I hardly ever eat junk food.
I’m going to be a teacher when I grow up. For this reason, I’m going to work hard and get good grades.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope that we can be good friends. That’s all. Thank you.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中已经给出了很多信息和要点。在写作时，要注意审题，不要遗漏要点。从题目可知，这篇文章是自我介绍，所以要用第一人称写，可以用一般现在时。在组织语言的时候，要注意表达的准确性。句子要完整，表达要清晰，句子之间要流畅。
【亮点分析】
这篇文章紧扣材料，内容完整，表达清晰，整体通顺流畅。里面不乏好的短语和句子，如：I live in Hangzhou, a very beautiful city我住在杭州，一个美丽的城市；句中用到了同位语结构。he’s taller and quieter than me, and I’m more outgoing.他比我高而且要安静，而我更外向；句中用到了形容词比较级，and 连接两个并列的句子。…and I also drink milk, I hardly ever eat junk food.我也喜欢喝牛奶，我几乎不吃垃圾食品。Hardly ever几乎不。