昨天，我们班级就雷锋精神是否过时的话题展开了积极的讨论，有的同学认为雷锋精神在现在的商品化社会已经过时，人们应该去追逐更加实际的一些东西比如金钱，名声和舒适的生

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昨天，我们班级就雷锋精神是否过时的话题展开了积极的讨论，有的同学认为雷锋精神在现在的商品化社会已经过时，人们应该去追逐更加实际的一些东西比如金钱，名声和舒适的生活。而大部分同学则持相反的观点。他们认为雷锋精神仍然是现代人必需的品质，这个伟大士兵的故事对各行各业的人产生影响，现实生活中就有许许多多的活雷锋在全心全意地为别人服务。请你把讨论的结果写出来并谈谈你的看法。
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答案

Yesterday, we held a discussion on whether the Spirit of LeiFeng was out of style. Opinions were divided into two.
A small number of the students think that Lei Feng’s spirit has gone out of style in today’s society. They reason that in commodity economy people should seek more practical things, such as fame, money and the comfortable life.
　　 However, the majority of the students claim that the spirit of Lei Feng still is still necessary.
The great soldier’s story has such a strong influence on people’s ideas, values and ways of          life that in every field of society there arise countless "Living Lei Fengs".
　　  In my opinion, the spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date. Instead, it has been brought forward. Today more and more "Lei Fengs" are coming forth from various circles . The spirit of Lei Feng——an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward.

解析

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