IV. 写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）以下是一位学生对英国出版社英语教材的反馈意见表，请根据要求写一篇英语短文，寄回英国出版社
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IV. 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
以下是一位学生对英国出版社英语教材的反馈意见表，请根据要求写一篇英语短文，寄回英国出版社。
姓名
| 李华
| 联系电话
| 0750--567890
| 学校
| 耀华中学
| 电子邮箱
| Lihua2009@yahoo.com
| 教材评价
| 主要优点
| 话题覆盖面广，涉及文化、历史、地理、科技等
| 主要缺点
| 部分句子表达深奥；语法如定语从句在某些课文中出现过于频繁, 显得生硬
| 建议
| 语法顺序由浅入深，先介绍句子基本成分；再学习复合句；增加与单元话题相关的阅读材料
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【写作要求】
1．5个句子介绍表格中对教材的评价内容。
2．将5个句子组织成连贯的短文，使用必要的连接词。
3．头和结尾已经给出，不计入句子数。
参考词汇：定语从句:attributive clause 复合句: compound clause
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear editors:
I am Li Hua from Class Ten Senior One of Yaohua Middle School. My opinions about the textbook are as follows:
___________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Please contact me at 0750—567890 or Lihua1995@yahoo.com
Best wishes!
Li Hua |
答案
One possible version：
First of all, what is good about the textbook is that it covers various subjects such as culture, history, geography and modern science and technology. But there are too many attributive clauses crowded in one passage, which does not seem natural. Besides, some of the sentences are too complicated to understand. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to say that the basic and simple sentence structures should come before the compound clauses in the aspect of grammar starting from easy level. At the same time, there should be more reading materials related to the topic of each unit. |
解析
| 略 |
举一反三
第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Every activity of our lives is communication of a sort, but it is through speech that man asserts his distinctness from other forms of life. He alone, of all animals, has the gift of verbal communication and it is through the quality of his speech that he best expresses his own individuality , his essence. When he is unable to say clearly what he means, through either nervousness, timidity, or foggy thought-processes, his personality is blocked off, dimmed out, and misunderstood.
Business, social, and personal satisfaction depend heavily upon a person’s ability to communicate clearly to his fellow men what he is, what he desires, and what he believes in. And now, as never before , in an atmosphere of international tensions, fears, and insecurities, we need the channels of communication between peoples kept open. It is my hope that The Quick and Easy Way to Effective Speaking will be helpful in all these ways, both to those who wish simply to function with greater ease and self-confidence in practical pursuits, and to those who wish to express themselves more completely as individuals seeking a deeper personal fulfillment.
--- Dorothy Carnegie，Introduction to The Quick and Easy Way to Effective Speaking
【写作内容】
1．用大约30个词概括原文内容。
2．然后用大约120个词表达自己对“沟通”的看法，内容包括：
（1）人们之间沟通的重要性
（2）用自己或他人的事例说明缺乏沟通可能造成误解甚至损失。
【写作要求】
1．作文中可使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容,
但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 |
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
近年来很多国家和地区受到一些病毒的侵袭，如SARS, H1N1等。健康一直是人们关注的问题，请以“health"为题谈谈你对此问题的看法。请注意在你的叙述中包含以下要点：
健康的重要性
对于一些病毒重在预防
摒弃不良生活习惯，多锻炼，保持饮食平衡 |
书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是新华中学高三（1）班的李华，参加了美国史迪威国际交流项目主办的Homestay International Summer Camp活动。活动方拟在周末举办一次联欢活动，现向你征求活动内容建议，请用英语就下面的要点提示写一篇100字左右的短文，交给美方组织者。
自我介绍
活动内容演唱英语歌曲
曲目建议 Home, My Sweet Home; Yesterday Once More
理由说明
注意：(1) 注意行文连贯得体； (2) 开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from_
Wish the evening successful!
Yours ever,
Li Hua |
假设你是新华中学的学生李明，班里从外地转来一名同学张华，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼请根据下列要点给他写一封信：
1．帮他分析原因
2．给他提出建议（至少两条）
3．陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意：1．词数：100左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出（不算入总词数）；
Dear Zhang Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class．So I hope I can give you a hand.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming |
小红、小明和小刚是第一中学的三个学生。他们根据自己的兴趣爱好，每周都花几个小时参加不同的志愿者（volunteer）工作。请根据下面所提供的信息，以 “Being a volunteer is great!” 为题目，给学校英文报投稿，报道他们的志愿都工作及他们的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.题目已为你写好
Being a volunteer is great!
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