are there any grammars mistakes in this article?

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are there any grammars mistakes in this article?
Yesterday,I cried.After school,some sad affairs made me cry.I was walking with the small voice weeps over.At first,Yingxin found me weep,then everyone found.They asked me why cry.I didn’t answer.Somebody told me ,that I’m a strong girl all the time.I was very surprise.In few minutes later,I smiled at everyone.
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Ying,Yi,Wen,Ying(glass),Xin
I’m sorry.I don’t know,I’m a strong girl in your heat all the time.Please believe me,I am not a girl who likes to cry.I will keep on smiling.

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I was walking with the small voice weeps over.->I was walking and weeping in a tiny voice.then everyone found->then everyone found that.They asked me why cry->They asked me why I was crying.that I’m ...