英语,请各位大师帮忙翻译,如果全部翻译并且正确,我会另加财富悬赏.谢谢~

题目

英语,请各位大师帮忙翻译,如果全部翻译并且正确,我会另加财富悬赏.谢谢~
When Kim was fourteen,her mother gave her a beautiful ring. Kim was very happy. But the next day she was very sad. Because she lost the ring when she was in the kitchen. And she couldn't find it in the kitchen.
That evenning her brother Steven was eating some cakes. "The cakes are wondrful. Who made.?"Steven asked. Then he stopped. He opened. He opened his mouth and took a ring out.
"Where did this come from? " he asked."This a surprise cake!"
Kim was pleased."My ring!"she said. " I'm sorry you had a surprise, but thank you very much for finding my ring."

答案

其实你的英语对于我来说很好啦.我才小学啊，呵呵。不过啊，以后翻译英文的时候，如果碰到里面有人物名字的时候，尽量不要用中文，就用他们的英文名，这样就不会出现失误，像我这篇，你就出现了失误。个人建议，谢谢~