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students from rural areas often find it difficult to access to university education,so people think universities should make it specially easy for them to study at.To what extent do you agree or disagree
Although I’m convinced that we should make it easier for the students from rural area to enter university,the proposals of how should we make it easier,as far as I am concerned,still remain controversial.Here I classified the numerous proposals into two types,one of which I’m against,the other I strongly support.
The first group of proposals suggests that measures should be taken to reduce the fees charged by the universities so that students from rural area can get easy access to university.I strongly support these proposals.I consider them reasonable mainly from two aspects.First,these proposals benefit the students from rural area,for the lack of financial support prevents these students from entering the university and hinders their path to higher education

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