假设你是李华，请根据以下表格为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，陈述你的观点。报纸的优点学生最喜爱栏目两点建议①了解很多信息，如音乐、文学、教育、体育、科技等。②
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假设你是李华，请根据以下表格为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，陈述你的观点。
报纸的优点
| 学生最喜爱栏目
| 两点建议
| ①了解很多信息，如音乐、文学、教育、体育、科技等。
② 经常阅读该报，增长知识、拓宽视野、提高英语水平。
| ①名称：Help
②原因：帮助解决学习和生活上的问题。
| ① 开设环境教育栏目，介绍环境保护方面的知识。
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注意：
①词数120左右。
②短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
③参考词汇：文学literature；拓宽视野broaden one’s horizons；栏目column
Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can...
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I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future! |
答案
Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can get information about a lot of things such as music, literature, education, sports, science and technology. And all articles are written in excellent English. Therefore, by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. The students’ favourite column is Help because it can help them work out problems on their study or life.
I’d like to make two suggestions for the newspaper. First, it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment. Second, it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions. I’m sure it will encourage more students to read Teens.
I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future! |
解析
试题分析：考查提纲式作文：为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，这篇文章的提纲很详细，根据所给提纲，以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了一些短语：broaden their horizons,开阔视野， encourage … to鼓励某人做…work out 算出，解决，还有句式也富有变化：And all articles are written in excellent English. by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. 这句话用了not only..but also…结构， it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment.这句话用了不定式做目的状语和宾语， it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions.这句话用了it做形式主语，还有文章还使用了Therefore,First, Second,这样的词使文章更加连贯。 |
举一反三
【写作内容】
你叫Jack,由于父母到中国工作，暂时寄读于某所中学。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你觉得有必要向学校食堂管理处反映一些问题，于是决定给管理处的黄先生写封信，信中包括如下内容：
1.学校食堂的优点：食堂干净,饭菜可口,服务员总是衣着整洁、面带微笑,服务态度好。
2.学校食堂的不足之处：价格偏高；等候时间较长,学生常常得等候近30分钟才能买到饭菜。
3.建议：尽快解决上述问题；希望及时加热饭菜，特别是在冬天时，这样才能确保学生健康。
【写作要求】
用五句话表达上表的全部内容，并组成一篇连贯的短文。（信的开头已经给出，不计入句数）
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Mar.26th, 2012源]
Dear Mr. Huang,
I’m Jack, a student in Class 2, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you my opinions and expectation of the school canteen.
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Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Jack |
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Mountain climbers around the world dream about going up Qomolangma, the highest mountain in the world. But many people who have climbed the mountain have left waste material that is harming the environment.
A team of Americans is planning the largest clean-up effort ever on Qomolangma. They will make the risky trip up the mountain next month.
The team of eight Americans will be guided by more than twenty Sherpas of Nepal(尼泊尔夏尔巴人). Their goal is to remove all the rubbish they see. They will spend two months cleaning up the mountain by gathering oxygen bottles, fuel containers, batteries, drink cans, human waste and all kinds of disposable products(一次性产品). They are expected to remove at least three tons of rubbish in large bags.
Team leader Robert Hoffman is making his fourth trip up the mountain. He says he hopes to bring Qomolangma to the condition it was in before the first successful climb fifty years ago. He says he hopes the effort will influence other people to clean up the environment closer home.
Disposable products on Qomolangma are a major concern. So the clean-up team will take along newly developed equipment to collect and treat disposable products. Over the years, the disposable products have polluted the mountain. In the warm season when the ice melts, the polluted water flows to Nepali villages below. The problem has gotten worse in recent years because climbing Qomolangma has become more popular.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括短文内容要点；
2．以约120个词就 “Cleaning the World”这个主题写一篇短文，并包括如下要点：
（1）你所居住的地方周围存在怎样的环境问题？
（2）你认为这个问题是什么造成的？
（3）为帮助解决这一问题，你做了什么？
【写作要求】
1.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 |
众所周知，2012年11月9日党的十八大报告中提出了建设“美丽中国”的理念。近来，我校也围绕这一主题积极开展美丽校园的活动。作为一名高中生，请你就如何美化校园谈谈个人看法和建议。
内容要点：1.遵守校纪校规。 （如：凭电子学生证进出校园，升旗和早操做到快、齐、静……）
2．言行举止文明优雅，讲究卫生，爱护公物。
3．有良好的精神面貌，穿戴整洁干净，穿校服进出校园。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2 .文章的开头已经给出（不计入总词数），可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词：rules and regulations（规章制度），Electronic student ID（电子学生证）
mental outlook(精神面貌)
Recently, our school has been carrying out some meaningful activities to beautify the schoolyard…__________________________________________________________________________________
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请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇120词左右的英语短文，并阐明自己从中得到的启发。
时间
| 2006年9月28日
| 地点
| 美国佛罗里达州（Florida）
| 事件
| 超过二十一万名中学生参加一项集体朗诵活动
| 结果
| 缔造不同地点、同时（simultaneously）大声朗读同一篇文章的吉尼斯世界记录
| 意义
| 培养学生的阅读兴趣和合作精神
| 对你的启发
| ……
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请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You may talk a lot in life, but you must learn to listen.
注意：
①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。 |
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