Many people were deeply moved when hearing his story.这个动词,move,可以做感动来说吧,感动用什么词啊,这个句子动词用对了吗

题目

Many people were deeply moved when hearing his story.这个动词,move,可以做感动来说吧,感动用什么词啊,这个句子动词用对了吗
如果不这样说,应该换一种说法怎么说?

答案

感动可以用moved来讲.
你这个句子里when 后面引导的是个状语,如果要保留hearing的话,应该说成Hearing his story,many people were deeply moved.
不过你的这个句子其实是可以说得通的,可以理解为许多人一听到他的故事就很感动.但是通常不这么说,通常的说法是Many people were deeply moved when heared his story.意思是许多人听到他的故事后非常感动.